This month's featured writing is by Anya. She uses descriptive adjectives in her writing that really makes you feel like you are actually there with her on her Halloween adventure. Enjoy!
Grim Reaper Last Halloween near midnight, my brother Arin and friends Sachi and Mihir and I were out on the never ending quest for candy in a very devious neighborhood. We finished all the houses but one and when we got there a horrible scraping noise was getting closer and closer until . . . . AHHH! Grim was making that noise! He was dragging a bloody ax and he was getting closer to Sashi! As he raised his ax he seemed to whisper "Too late." I ran from my place in the lead and took Sachi's arm and pulled her to safety. I got to the candy first, then Mihir, Sachi, Arin, and then Grim. As we got our candy we ran back to our neighborhood as the candy quest ended. In conclusion, we came home with no missing limbs! The quest ends here!
36 Comments
carrie lawrence
11/10/2015 11:38:49 am
GREAT JOB ANYA!!!!
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Anya
12/4/2015 09:36:08 am
Thanks!
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Marcus
12/4/2015 09:30:38 am
your writing is awseome
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Anya
12/4/2015 09:37:38 am
I am happy now.
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anya you are smart and awesome
12/4/2015 09:35:00 am
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Anya
12/4/2015 09:37:03 am
Yay!
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Treven
12/4/2015 09:45:09 am
this was really smart to do you are awesome and smart don't let any thing get you sad do hard in 4th grade Anya
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Treven
12/4/2015 10:03:04 am
keep up the hard work
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love ADDYSON
12/4/2015 10:10:10 am
love your smile
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Anya
12/4/2015 10:59:25 am
Thanks Addyson. Your a good friend.
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Treven
12/4/2015 11:05:59 am
you are really awesome keep up the great work hope you pass 3rd,4th,5th,6th,7th,8th,9th,10th,11th,12th,13th,14th,15th,and16th grade Anya you are awesome and a nice or should I say really really really nice freind
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Anya
12/4/2015 11:07:42 am
I hope you pass all those to! :)
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Finley
12/4/2015 11:06:25 am
I like you treven
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addyson
12/4/2015 11:24:37 am
you to
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addyson
12/4/2015 11:25:48 am
you are a great awesome friend
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:) Anya :)
12/4/2015 12:32:55 pm
Addy is awesome like everyone in this class. :)
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carissa
12/4/2015 12:34:05 pm
wow anya great writing I loved hope I see you until collage ends
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Anya
12/4/2015 12:51:08 pm
Thanks!
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yay yes addy
12/4/2015 01:06:26 pm
anya is awesome and so is her writting
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Anya
12/5/2015 07:52:04 am
Addy is awesome and so is HER writing.
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AdDySoN
12/7/2015 02:33:22 pm
YAY! thanks anya but your writing is better
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Rita ;)
12/9/2015 12:52:27 pm
Anya. like your writing!Yours to Addy
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Anya
12/10/2015 09:40:23 am
Meep meep meep!!!!!!! :)
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12/14/2015 02:12:44 pm
ha ha ;)
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Anya
1/15/2016 02:33:58 pm
Who made their name "?" ?
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Madelelyn
12/15/2015 12:37:55 pm
L so love your writing!
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Anya ;)
12/15/2015 12:42:35 pm
Oh-oh! Maddie made a boo-boo! * *
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Maddie
12/15/2015 12:47:27 pm
You think my reply is funny Anya?! :[
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Anya
1/8/2016 04:49:56 pm
Did that make you sad? I'm sorry! :( :/
Anya
12/15/2015 12:49:39 pm
* *
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Proud Anya
1/8/2016 04:48:49 pm
I'm proud of my classmates, writing, teacher, and mostly, I am proud that I know you all! ;) :) !
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Madelyn
1/15/2016 02:33:29 pm
Love your writing Anya:-]
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Anya
3/4/2016 02:15:35 pm
Silly Maddie
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Anya
7/5/2016 11:34:12 am
I wish that I called it "The Candy Quest". to bad, so sad. To late now... I miss school.
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Anya
2/10/2017 09:39:21 am
:3
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Someone
11/4/2017 11:40:41 am
*Gasps Loudly*
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